THE LECTURER TO LEARNER
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So the topic is high speed response teams for patients. Tachman et al. (2017) has no relevance to this topic. Metzger et al. (2019) is about link between maternal glucose and neonatal adiposity. This has no relevance to the chosen topic, or to the first article. Chandler et al. (2016) has no connection to the other two sources. Bottomley et al. (2018) is also not research, is related to quality of life of cancer patients, but is in no way related to the identified topic.
Please review this assignment. You will need to find four studies directly related to the chosen topic, because you will need them for the next assignment. None of these articles is acceptable and are not research from looking at the abstract. See all of the “Not applicable” or “Not mentioned” in the columns? That’s indication that these are not appropriate.
The first two elements of the rubric were not met. The charts were very incomplete and the articles were not appropriate, given the chosen topic. Based on these articles, a clinical best practice could not be ascertained and no sources are cited for the paper portion of this assignment.
The title of the paper should be at the top of the first page, centered, not bold, with each word starting with a capital letter. It should be the same as the title on the “Title Page”.
The Introduction should be placed after the title and should not have a header. The purpose statement should be included here.
What group? What study? None of the articles in the grid are related to this topic?
Which articles? None seemed to be about this topic. No sources are being cited here.
This is different from high speed response. Where is the source for this information.
Citation?
There is no evidence shown in this paper or tables to support your conclusion. Where is the evidence?
This is not the topics of these papers and they do not appear to be research.
No sources are cited in the paper. None of these should be included in the reference list therefore. The four studies directly related to your topic should be discussed, and should be cited and listed here.
Italicize journal titles and book titles in the references.
Italicize journal titles and book titles in the references.
