Judaism paper needs to be revised for grammar errors, sentences and syntax.

Judaism paper needs to be revised for grammar errors, sentences and syntax. 

Please see the attachment, I want you to correct every sentence from errors.Remove sentences and add as necessary.  The paper now doesn’t make sense to a native professor, therefore, I want it to be an A+ paper. 

 

I also, attached the notes I took in order to write this paper. Look at them and make sure those notes are still used in the paper. 

 

 

Thank you so much.